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The succubus village, day 2

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The innkeeper quickly looked through her keys for the right one hastily.  Those cries and moans, surely her guest must be ill or worse possibly!  That couldn't be allowed, not with her reputation on the line.  None could have prepared for what she found when she opened the door.  There in the room was a naked, demonic looking creature who turned around as she entered, lustful power gleaming in her eyes.

“You...you're a...” she stammered as the figure stepped closer to her.

“A succubus, yes,” Tobias said as she per her arms around the innkeeper's waist, “And I sense no fear from you, awe in fact.”

“N-no...I always secretly admired the mamano.  That's one of the reasons I didn't like being stuck living here...” she admitted.

“Do you want to be one?  You only need to say the words you know.”

It took her mere seconds to think about.

“Yes!  I want to be a succubus!”

Just hearing those words seemed to spark something in Tobias.  Yes, that desire that had gone unfulfilled for so long.  She felt drawn to embrace her tightly as she felt her demonic power begin to seep into the entranced innkeeper.  Her skin began to stain into a bright violet color as the purple glow to her eyes overtook her normal eye color.  Her figure grew more pronounced, straining her clothes in all the right areas before her wings and tail outright tore through them.  A pair of horns crowned her head to finish off the look.

“Did...did it work?  Am I...” she said, almost daring not to hope for it.

“Yes, take a look.”

She slowly walked over to the mirror and looked at herself, her eyes lighting up as though falling in love at first sight with the ravishing creature looking back at her.

“Oh!  I'm really a succubus!  It's everything I ever dreamed of!” she said feeling herself over, relishing how sensitive she was all over, “Are you going to give everyone this gift?”

“The demon lord wants me to...somehow it feels right to,” Tobias said.

“And why shouldn't it?  Everyone should be able to feel this,” the innkeeper said dreamily as she continued to admire herself.

“Yes...yes I should!” Tobias said now starting to feel more clear headed.

“Oh...morning already?  We better not be seen like this.  I think I can...” the innkeeper said as she concentrated for a moment and suddenly shifted back to her human form.  Tobias was quickly able to follow suit, turning into a woman who looked just like her former self's twin sister if he had one.

“Hmm...I can lend you one of my dresses...you might need a new name too,” the innkeeper suggested.

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Soon enough, a girl named Tamara emerged from the inn to get to know the village better and pick her targets.

The church?  Far too risky, especially with the paladin who served as the guard captain here.  She needed to be stronger first.

The old couple running the store?  Possible...but she'd need more information.

The martial artists who lived just up the mountain path?  It would be easy to catch him alone...but she wasn't strong enough to overcome his mental discipline.

The two sisters running the dairy farm?  Worth considering, she'd check on them later.

The blacksmith?  Ah, hard working, tired, easy to catch alone.  Her path was clear!

"A customer?  Hold on, I'll be right there," came a voice from hot, smokey room behind the counter just before she emerged, a strong looking woman bearing the dirt marks of a hard day's work, "What can I do for you?"

"I was wondering if you could reforge my sword," Tamara said laying it down on the table, "Afraid I banged it up a little in my last battle."

"Hmm...a fine blade.  I'm surprised someone like you is a warrior," she said examining the weapon, "No scars at all?"

"I always was good at avoiding such trouble.  So anyway, the sword?"  Tamara replied, attempting to steer back to the matter at hand.

"Ah yes, of course.  I should have it done by tomorrow morning," she said, running her fingers down the side of the blade in fascination as Tamara nodded and headed out with a smile to her face.

"I will only have just begun my friend..." Tamara muttered as she peered back at the demonic energy permeating the blade, unseen by the blacksmith's untrained eyes.

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The dairy farm was a rather quaint looking place, the peaceful mooing sounds of cattle gave it a rather relaxing atmosphere.

"Oh, hello there!" came the voice of one of the sisters as she greeted the approaching stranger.

"New here?" asked the other as she looked up from her work.

"Yes, I'm just a traveler resting in this village for a while," Tamara said courteously, "I've never looked at a farm like this close up before."

"Oh, you've never tried fresh milk then?  Come on, you haven't lived," the younger sister said merrily as she tugged at Tamara to follow her to the barn.

She worked energetically as she showed Tamara how to milk a cow as Tamara simply watched with interest, though not for the reasons the unsuspecting young farmer thought.

"And there," she said with a pail of fresh milk all ready to go, "Want to try some?"

"I'd love to.  It looks divine," Tamara said excited.

As the younger sister turned to get them both some cups, Tamara reached over and put her hand to the side of the bucket.  The milk glowed violet for a brief moment before fading just as she returned and poured them each a cup.

"To the festival!  I do hope you'll stay for it," she said tapping their cups together.

"How could I possibly refuse with such charming people here?" Tamara commented as they both drank.

"Mm...oooh...." the sister said in an almost lustful moan, "This batch is...wow!"

"Is something wrong?" Tamara asked.

"Oh, no, I guess I was just hot and really needed it.  Well I have to get back to work.  I'll see you later."

"Sure, maybe I can help here some time," Tamara said smiling.

Still getting used to her powers, Tamara felt rather tired and decided to retire to the inn for now.  The next morning, she could check up on what she hoped to be new future succubi.
So sorry, this took WAY longer than it should have.  The summer months just wreck my drive due to both heat and being tired from work.  Mostly we just set the stage for the next day but we do get once nice TF out of it so enjoy.  ^^
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Uh, may I ask what happened to chapters 3&4?